This is my final draft of my magazine.
The changes i have made to the front cover is the removal of the white background of the text 'Luna Starrs' i also made the text red to suggest 'danger' about the artist and to link the masthead of the magazine with the headline, and also link in with the blood red lips of the artist.
The changes that i have made to the contents page are small, i have added in a shape on the picture of the artist 'Luna Starrs' to signify what page she is on within the magazine. i also changed the background around the text which states ' AMPLIFY This Week' in order to make the text stand out more and make a bolder impact. furthermore i added more text into the 'editors overview' section to fill in the blank space at the bottom of the page to give a more professional look.
The changes that i have made to my double page is quite significant as i have changed the image on the left of the page as the previous image had an out of focus hand which didn't give a very professional finish to the page. the new image is all in focus, allowing the audience to fully see the hand which was previously out of focus. i also used an image which gave the artist more of an attitude and projected her care free personality. i also added the quote '' i was hospitalised " to create interest from the audience in the hope that they will want to find out why she was hospitalised.